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What do you think of the What-If Stories? What would you like to see in the future? Who are your favorite characters?
A writer writes what people want to read. Give me feedback and you just might see it in a future A What-If Story!
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WudluvaCold1
07/10/2003, 14:36
Hey Masada
I just read #5 good twist. Very good flow however, I dont know if you read my post in the superman thread .It was about detail. given the readers a little and letting their imagination do the rest. There's a line were you say "They both had been chloroformed" this is the perfect oppurtunity to give us some detail without leading us by the hand. "Just suggestions" but you could have said "the smell of chloroform still fresh in his nostrils. The taste of it a tingling the buds of his tongue", But I love the way you have fresh ideas and the flow is very good which is important to keep the readers mind from losing focus.
clixhunter
07/10/2003, 14:45
heres a good one for you: What if Reed Richards had formed the Avengers to deal with the Hulk threat.
instead of coming back from space and forming the ff they come back in time to hear on the news of this rampaging beast and answer the call along with a few other heroes.
simply4est
07/10/2003, 16:02
I've enjoyed your stories very much - sort of a cross between the What If and Elseworlds stories.
To give you an idea what I like, I thought the best written of those was "What if Punisher Killed Daredevil?".
Your What If on slavery brought back memories of the Elseworlds one with Steel.
how about simple stuff?
"what if spider-man stopped his uncle's murder?"
"what if bruce banner didnt save rick jones?"
"what if superman landed on mars?"
"what if crisis on infinate earths never happened?"
those themselves could be quite good! i dont have much writing talent, so i'll leave this to anyone else who wants to do it.
How's this one:
What if....Spiderman got the Infinity Gauntlet?
Originally posted by spam01
How's this one:
What if....Spiderman got the Infinity Gauntlet?
You know what? I'm going to do that one.
Cool! I look forward to it!
clixhunter
07/11/2003, 14:20
elseworlds:
what if wilson slade was batman, and bruce wayne was deathstroke?
what if batman never recovered from his fight with bane and nightwing had taken over as batman permanently?
The_Spider44
07/11/2003, 15:20
Originally posted by clixhunter
elseworlds:
what if batman never recovered from his fight with bane and nightwing had taken over as batman permanently?
..what would happen ? We would have a more clear-thinking, level-headed, more-interesting to read Batman, Bruce bites ! Richard rocks !
pirateman
07/11/2003, 15:29
my all time fav what if has got to be what if wolverine was lord of the vampires i belive it was part of the time quake series
CyberVenom
07/11/2003, 15:48
I've always loved What If? and Elseworlds. matter of fact, in the CyberVenom Creation: You Pick series, one of the figures that can be randomly selected (although it hasn't been posted yet) is What If? Wolverine from What If the X-Men lost "Inferno".
It's crazy!
As for creating What If's? and/or Elseworlds, I've got plenty of ideas, but I'm no good as a writer. I'm an artist. So here's some of the ideas I had. Some have plenty o' explaination, some don't.
1. What if?....After bonding with Peter Parker and
splitting ways with him, the Venom symbiote doesnt go
to Eddie Brock. It wants a bigger source, the techno
organic virus, the Phallanx.
The Venom Virus would be all but unstoppable. The
Venom symbiotes weaknesses, being fire and sonics,
would be nullified.
After a long battle against The X-men, Generation X,
and Spider-Man, the symbiote wins, with everyone
retreating, with the exception of Peter Parker, who
thinks he can beat it. The Virus would soon overtake
Parker, who now becomes......CyberVenom! (Great name,
huh?)
The Venom Virus would eventually take over Douglock,
who intern takes over SHIELD and the Red Skull!
Thus begins the Venom Virus (CyberVenom, the Phallanx,
Douglock, the SHIELD HoverBase, and the new, enhanced
Red Skull), vs. the Entire Marvel Universe.
Eventually the Marvel Universe would win, (of course),
and the Venom Virus would take the lives of Dr. Doom
(who tries to take over the virus), Iron Man (the
techno organic part of the virus takes over the armor
and crushes Tony), Cyclops (who dies saving Prof. X),
Blink (who eventually dies the exact same way she does
in the Marvel Universe now), Banshee(drowns while
trying to save Blink), Prof. X (who thinks he can beat
it mentally), Black Panther, SpiderMan (he dies with
the virus), and Daredevil (the virus overruns his
hightened senses, Matt goes crazy, becomes a
casualty)!
2. I've had plenty of Elseworlds thoughts. Like this one (and I've even started character development!): Suppose we live in a world where there are no Superheroes, no villains. Nothing. Life happens as usual. But, being a high tech entertainment era, the biggest thing to happen in the movie business around the world hits: the JLA. Their movie's effects and cast are so well done that the world actually believes that they are the real deal. They are Super-Celebrities.
But what happens when a real alien invasion happens? The world en masse turns to the JLA! A bunch of actors who in all purposes, are normal humans with absolutely no powers, yet they are the defenders of the planet!
3. Another Elseworlds, entitled "World's Finest". This one is based on mixing two of my favorite things: Comic Books and Pro Wrestling. Two of the world's most well known and favorite wrestlers "SuperMan" and "The Batman", team up to form the team "World's Finest". All's well inside the ring, but behind the curtain, the promoter of the federation, Lex Luthor, secretly wants them down and out. When World's Finest turn down an offer to lose their big title match against "Doomsday-The Forever Man" and "The Jokester", Lex takes it into his own hands by kidnapping the teams Manager, Lois Lane, who happens to be SuperMan's wife! Can World's Finest find Lois in time? Will they lose the belts in a chance to save her? Can two of the world's biggest wrestling fans, Jimmy Olsen and Tim Drake, help in any way, shape, or form?
DeltaPi1049
07/14/2003, 11:47
what if instead of being friendly, Martian Manhunter came to be ruler earth?
Superman could be like the leader of the revolution. I dont know if this would be a good story, I dont really know the story behind MM. I think it would be cool.
or
What if gwen stacy wasnt killed when she was thrown off the bridge? How would have ASM #122 changed? How would have the rest of the series changed? What if it was MJ who was killed? or even Aunt May?
or
What if Doc Ock successfully married Aunt may?
Those are some good ideas in my mind, I would like to see you write them and make my dreams come true!:cheeky:
phantom1592
07/14/2003, 12:40
I like anything with Daredevil or hal Jordan in it. :)
WHat if Magus caught Warlock on his way to Earth?
(No Techno-organic Virus... No Phalanx... etc...)
What if Peter Parker accepted the alien Symbiote?
What if Wolverine had helped Pheonix II kill Selene?
What if the Punisher had killed Kingpin?
(Power vaccuum, etc...)
What if Doom had heeded Richard's warning about the experiment that scarred his face?
Just a few...
Originally posted by phantom1592
I like anything with Daredevil or hal Jordan in it. :)
A very different version of Daredevil is in A What-If Story #2
A What-If Story #5 is complete. Check it out and let me know what you think.
WudluvaCold1
07/14/2003, 18:19
Here's a couple:
What if, Lex Luther headed the Weapon X program?
Or
What If, Bruce Wayne had discovered the "Mljonir"?
CyberVenom
07/14/2003, 18:23
I was just thinking of some like that. For example:
1. What would happen if Kal-el did'nt land in Smallville, USA, DCU but in New York City, USA, Marvel U? Or Wakanda, Africa, Marvel U?
2. What if Captain America spear-headed the fights during WWII.....in the DCU?
I need the assistance of you comics folk out there!
In A What-If Story #4 I had The Vision put on the Green Lantern ring. However, I am on the horns of a dilemma. I have to question myself about this, thus I need your opinion, educated or otherwise.
The GL ring works by willpower. Can The Vision make it work?
simply4est
07/17/2003, 12:43
Hmm... Well I would say he could use it because he's able to make choices and act on those applying willpower (okay, of a more mechanical nature) to whatever ends to effect his choices.
simply4est
07/17/2003, 12:55
Having posted that though I can think of more interesting possibilities than for Vision to use it himself...
elaborate! elaborate!
Other folks I need more opinions!
CyberVenom
07/17/2003, 13:16
I don't see why Vision wouldn't be able to use it. He's not completely a robot, he's an android, which makes him a living being, thus allowing him to have willpower. Shoot, he's more human than half of the Avengers. If I remember correctly, when Vision was asked to join the Avengers, he cried. The stinkin' robot cried! He's got the willpower. :)
Any more opinions on whether or not Vision has the willpower to use the Green Lantern ring?
Also, for a future story, Give me a list of the 8 (eight) classic Justice League members that 'defined' the League for you. Which Eight just scream Justice League?
Shibitz54321
07/17/2003, 14:01
hey masada,
i only read a couple of what if, but it realy is a great idea! i always have been thinking, "the marvel univers is so fragile! the slightest events can alter an enetire universe!"
what if...
dr strange had gotten the power from eternity to defeat mordo and dormmamu?
the girl never helped dr strange defeat dormmamu, and dormmamu defeated dr strange and tried to take over earth?
captain america had gotten amnesia from being frozen and was found buy loki and became evil?
dr. doom had defeated the fantastic four with the silver surfers powers and drove for world conquest?
green goblin didn't die from the collision with his glider?
instead of a sinister six, it is the sinsister seven! and it included scorpion?
CyberVenom
07/17/2003, 14:12
The 8 people that say "Justice League"
1. Superman
2. Batman
3. Wonder Woman
4. Green Lantern (Hal Jordan)
5. Flash (Barry Allen)
6. Hawkman
7. Green Arrow
8. Martian Manhunter
clixhunter
07/17/2003, 14:22
masada...there is no reason he couldnt use it, it functions off of will...and vision has will....it would probably just not be very powerful. he would have to be very careful. also creativity would be limited. on the other hand, because he is very literal- he might just come up with some uses "humans" would never of thought of.
simply4est
07/17/2003, 15:49
To elaborate..
How about Vision Phasing the ring into the hands of any one of currently good candidates...
Sabra fighting like crazy right now, I think she has the most Guard KOs so far
Supes - revege for the home world - sort of a OWAW Supes with GL ability..
A revenge seeking Dinah..
Also, Shibitz54321 had a What If:
dr. doom had defeated the fantastic four with the silver surfers powers and drove for world conquest?
I was thinking of one like this before... I imagined Dr. Strange discovering the Four defeated, assembling a New Four - himself, Hulk, Namor - rescuing Surfer to join them also, combining to defeat the Cosmic Doom!
simply4est
07/17/2003, 15:49
To elaborate..
How about Vision Phasing the ring into the hands of any one of currently good candidates...
Sabra fighting like crazy right now, I think she has the most Guard KOs so far
Supes - revege for the home world - sort of a OWAW Supes with GL ability..
A revenge seeking Dinah..
Also, Shibitz54321 had a What If:
dr. doom had defeated the fantastic four with the silver surfers powers and drove for world conquest?
I was thinking of one like this before... I imagined Dr. Strange discovering the Four defeated, assembling a New Four - himself, Hulk, Namor - rescuing Surfer to join them also, combining to defeat the Cosmic Doom!
Docdoom1000
07/17/2003, 16:03
The Wolverine weapon x project was succesful
Dog never killed jameses puppy (No one would have died)
Joker killed Batman
Superman crashed in Iraq/Afghanistan
Al Tariq killed Cap,
James Hudson found frozen captain A.
simply4est
07/17/2003, 16:08
Classic JLA
Superman
Batman
Flash
Green Lantern
Wonder Woman
Aquaman
Martian Manhunter
Hawkman
clixhunter
07/17/2003, 17:16
do some crossover what-ifs.....what if the avengers were (people who seeking vengeance)
ghost-rider
batman
punisher
nightwing
martian manhunter
oracle
dr. doom
starfire
robotman
etc....
and the justice league has to stop their assassination attempt on pres reed richards
jla
capt america
superman
wonder woman
iron man
green arrow
warbird
the thing
justice
firestar
etc....
Basil Elks
07/17/2003, 17:21
What if Godzilla fought Clifford the big red dog?
Braavosi
07/17/2003, 17:33
What ifs...
What if... Reed, Sue and Ben were trapped in the negative zone forever?
What if... Silver Surfer never became Galactus' herald?
What if... Jason Todd never died?
What if... Betsy Braddock became Phoenix?
What if... The U-Men killed Cyclops and Emma Frost?
What if... The Beyonder never lost his power to Dr. Doom?
What if... Cassandra Nova succeeded in wiping out Earth's mutant population?
What if... Carrie Kelly became Catwoman?
What if... Ra's al Ghul killed the JLA?
What if... The Avengers lost in Avengers #1?
What if... Galactus had succeeded in eating the Shi'ar homeworld?
What if... The Ultimate Nullifier never existed?
What if... Spider-Man kept his six arms?
Originally posted by Docdoom1000
What If Joker killed Batman
Check out A What-If Story #5 for that.
Originally posted by Braavosi
What if... Jason Todd never died?
Check out A What-If Story #5 for that.
A What-If Story #4 is complete! :)
I just started A What-If Story #7
The story starts in 1939.
it's a Superman story with one very important twist. Read episode one to find out what that is.
CyberVenom
07/18/2003, 13:03
Originally posted by Masada
I just started A What-If Story #7
The story starts in 1939.
it's a Superman story with one very important twist. Read episode one to find out what that is.
Interesting concept. But I'll go ahead and warn you, tread lightly. I'm sure if you say even one thing that could be taken the wrong way, it will be. Good luck. :)
CaptainOutwit
07/18/2003, 13:08
I go for what-ifs with a psychological twist. For example:
1. What if Bruce Wayne were Doctor Doom?
Not that farfetched. Make Bruce the young prince of Latervaria, parents killed by dissidents backed by the CIA. Bruce uses his nation's fortune to train himself and develop a suit of armor to combat the evils of imperialism. Enter his archenemies, U.S. government agents mutated by cosmic radiation: The Human Bat, Ivy Girl, The Bane (who wasn't fully mutated, and requires regular blood transfusions from the other three to retain his tremendous strength) and Mr. Enigma (Reed Richards/Riddler amalgam, with genius warped into a kind of unpredictable insanity that even Bruce can't fathom or outwit).
2. What if Clark Kent were Thor?
Ragnarok occurs, and when Thor dies, Odin sends his spirit to earth to inhabit the infant body of Clark Kent. Kent grows up, learns about justice, responsibility and the American way from his parents, then one day goes to investigate a meteor that landed in his family's crops. It turns out to be Mjolnir, and Kent is transformed into Thor. Problem is, Odin wants Thor to avenge the Asgardians against the Frost Giants and become a true Norse warrior, but Kent is something of a boy scout and has other, less bloodthirsty ideas about how to use his new-found powers.
Docdoom1000
07/20/2003, 08:00
What if the symbiote took over peter parkers mind, so he became Venom.
Docdoom1000
07/20/2003, 08:02
No..wait, what if when Reed richards tried to seperate the symbiote from Spidey, it took over all the FF.
A What-If Story #7
and
A What-If Story #8
are currently being written. The former I've mentioned. The latter is a surprising twist on a foursome we all know and love.
Docdoom1000
07/21/2003, 16:15
i'm really gettin into 7 an i just read the first 2 episodes of 8
Still looking for feedback and dream What-Ifs. Let's keep the thread alive.
Asnoochie
07/24/2003, 13:19
The only what if I could think of is What if Lex Luthor were the Green Lantern?
What if...Bruce Banner came from a happy home?
Just think what would the gamma bomb have turned Banner into if he did not have all that pent up rage against his father?
Alot of possibilities here.
First Lensman
07/24/2003, 14:08
What if Peter Parker were not the only one bitten by the radioactive or genetically altered spider? Have others that were bitten causing stranger mutations. It's determined by these others (or the people treating them) that transfusions from the newly arrived Spider-man will make them more human and controllable. They and the mutations are hunting Spider-man.
First Lensman
07/24/2003, 14:17
What if Kal-El landed in an Indian Reservation in the midwest? Would he want to save the United States when he grows up?
Any feelings anyone wants to express about the current storylines, #7 and #8?
I am really enjoying #8. Looks real good. I'm just waiting for the flower loving punisher to show up.
here's an idea:
What if....The punisher became Galactus' herald?
bladesword
07/29/2003, 17:22
what if harry osborn was bitten by the spider instead of peter
Originally posted by seven
What if...Bruce Banner came from a happy home?
Just think what would the gamma bomb have turned Banner into if he did not have all that pent up rage against his father?
Alot of possibilities here.
A Happy Hulk
j/k :) good question!
Docdoom1000
08/04/2003, 15:53
The Hulk would be pink
A What-If Story #7 and #8 are complete.
Any feedback so far on #9?
A What-If Story #9 is complete. Tell me what you think by replying at the end of the story.
BTW, What would you folks like to see for the big one, A What-If Story #10? List for me your 3 favorite Marvel Heroes, your 3 favorite DC heroes, and your favorite non-mainstream hero along with any stories you'd like to see.
suprsktrjustn
08/11/2003, 14:59
1. Gambit
2. the thing
3. Daredevil
1. Cyborg
2. Batman
3. Martian Manhunter
BOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1. Silver Surfer
2. Captain America
3. Iron Man
1. Superman
2. Hal Jordan Green Lantern
3. Atom
1. The Shadow (pulp magazine version)
SkeletalDragon
08/12/2003, 05:06
My three favorite Marvel.
1. Capt. America
2. Bishop
3. Moon Knight
My three favorite DC.
1. Slobo ( I know he's dead, but he rocks from beyond the grave, you bastiches.)
2. Green Arrow
3. Nightwing
And I'm not sure about non-mainstream,...and since the comic is no longer made,...I'll say.
PITT!!!!
clixhunter
08/12/2003, 09:50
worlds finest: what if superman was found and raised by mr ans mrs wayne/ and batman was an orphan raised by mr and ms kent?
what if the xmen were villains formed by two old friends whose vision was the same?...prof x and magneto.
what if the fantastic four were mutants?
Originally posted by clixhunter
worlds finest: what if superman was found and raised by mr ans mrs wayne
This is in an Elseworlds story called Speeding Bullets, as well as an 'imaginary story' from Detective Comics in the 80's
Wasteland
08/19/2003, 22:36
I would just like to say that your stories have been awesome Masada. I enjoy reading them very much, and look forward to each new one. As far as the question:
3 Marvel heroes:
1. Deadpool
2. Spiderman
3. Captain America
3 DC Heroes:
1. Superman
2. Green Arrow
3. Nightwing
3 Image Heroes:
1. Spawn
2. Union
3. Warblade
As far as ideas for What ifs?:
What if Peter Parker had turned evil? "With great power comes great responsibility" never gets ingrained into his head, and all the bullying at school makes him worse and worse until he snaps at the death of his Uncle Ben...
How about just a great evil team up of mercs...
Power Man, Iron Fist, Taskmaster, Deadpool, Silver Sable, Elektra, Deathstroke, maybe a couple of others whom I can't think of right now. Out to save the world...for a price.
Anything with Deadpool and Taskmaster would be great...I jsut love those guys...(old Taskie of course) Taskmaster's school of Merc's, much like Xavier's school. Takes in exceptional people and trains them.
Just a few...
Spyder's Web
01/11/2004, 20:34
One story idea is what would have happened if Peter Parker was the Green Goblin and Norman Osborn was Spider-Man?
ironman1110
01/22/2004, 22:33
What if:
Batman's parents lived through the mugging?
Superman DID marry Wonder Woman? And if they had a Child?
Daredevil had surgery that repaired his vision?
The Joker TRULY turned good? Through Mind Control? Brainwashing?
Magneto and Xaviers roles were reversed (magneto founds Xman, Xavier founds brotherhood)?
Spiderman is retaken by the symbyote venom and kills captain america?
a few matchups:
Hulk vs. Thing
Spiderman vs. Captain America
Wolverine vs. Daredevil
Thor vs. Silver Surfer
These haven't been up on the front page in months, so...
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